Revealed by P.C. Cast and Kristin Cast

           Zoey Redbird has changed as a person because of old magick. But the thing is Zoey hasn't noticed that she changed, but Aphrodite and Shaylin, have noticed. Aphrodite has visions. Shaylin has true sights, meaning Shaylin can see your true colors and what you're feeling. Aphrodite had a vision that Zoey was going mad.  Shaylin saw that Zoey's colors are twisted, she is mad and frustrated.  After Zoey found out that the two prophetess were pretty much stalking her because Aphrodite was worried about Zoey.  Zoey got mad because she got the wrong idea and shot old magick at Shaylin, then furiously ran away.  Then Zoey killed two people and went mad and told the police.  The police arrested Zoey then she went to jail saying," I deserve this ...," over and over again.

ONE OF THE STUPIDEST THING I EVER DONE IN MY LIFE (FOR NOW)        

            One of the stupidest things I have done in my life was when I got a glass stuck on the side of my foot. Well let us start off at the beginning; it was when I missed my session with Mr. Valentin. The session is basically a talk for only a few minutes, but I didn’t go because I was furious at him for giving me that. So, instead I went home with my friends and was laughing off the angry. But I was still in my rebellious, mad stage so, I went outside. (Which is not a good idea because whenever I do something wrong I always pay for it, like getting hurt, for this example.)    

My friend and I was playing with a basketball which, unfortunately it went inside this creepy haunted trash place where it is filled with broken glass, plants, wild cats and well trash. But that is inside the haunted trash place. But the outside looks really weird because there is a wooden fence all around it, plus it is in the middle of our block. (Just like every scary movie has.)

            Okay there are two openings, one of them is the safe opening and the other is SUPER dangerous because if you fall, there is glass underneath so that is going to hurt……….badly. Also there is the safe part which is where you just you slip in. But for some stupid reason I go through the dangerous end and I DON’T KNOW WHY but I think you guys guessed what was going to happened next………I fell. Yea that happened, but fortunately I caught myself before my head could get smashed on the glass. But things weren’t all right as I thought in that moment because instead of getting glass stuck in my head, I get a glass stuck on my foot. Bravo. Bravo. The thing is that I didn’t notice that until my sandal was getting a little wet and finally I looked down to see that my foot was bleeding and that there was a glass in my foot but  

but I didn’t feel any pain but that didn’t matter right now so I got out of the haunted trash place to see my mother outside going to my aunt’s house which is close to where my friend and I are, so we had to get out of there (now you might be thinking go to her your hurt and stuff but no I have a tendency to hide the fact that I got hurt I know it’s stupid, but it’s a bad habit.) So we went to my friend’s house trying to wipe of the blood after I took the glass off but the blood just came on and on and finally I heard my mom shouting my name, “Maisha, where are you get down here.” So I jumped and waddled down the stairs and my mom started freaking out and I had to get my feet bandaged up after I got yelled at my brothers while my mom stood of to the corner saying, “oh god oh god.” So that’s done.

            But then I got the speech from my dad it goes like this. “Maisha you did something really stupid today you didn’t tell your mother and I that you are was hurt, again. These needs to stop you could seriously get hurt. He paused and then looked at me with sad and worried eyes and said, “I’m really disappointed at you, you should have known to come to us, we are your parent we try to protect you remember that okay.” Suddenly I started crying I didn’t want to be a disappointment but also all the guilt that was building up inside had fallen down I then hugged my dad saying I was sorry over and over again. I knew that I was never going to do that again.

                 

Hidden

by:P.C. Cast and Kristin Cast

     The author wants us to know,think and feel is to trust our gut and closest friends.Stevie Rae of all people knows should this . Stevie Rae was hiding Rephaim ( her lover) because she thought that her friends were going to kill her lover, and she didn't want that to happen. But then she did tell Zoey but it was too late because everything was backfiring at Stevie Rae, things about Rephaim and she cant keep the secret any longer it hurts to much and Zoey is thinking that Stevie Rae is moving further away as a roommate and a best friend.

     Now that Stevie Rae has told Zoey that she is in love with Rephaim, she thought that Zoey will yell at her but really all Zoey did was give her a warm smile and said "okay".

    

      So this book was mostly about friendship but also being trustworthy but that all comes in a package if you are a good friend.

1) How does the author use craft to reveal character in my book?

My book that I'm reading , Betrayed by P.C. Cast and Kristin Cast reveal their characters in dialogue and thought .

For example , " I didn't take over the Dark Daughters to start a war at the school , I took over because Aphordite was a bully , and she had to be stopped .......". This is saying that she is kind of a leader and she fights for what she believes in , and she knows what is right from wrong. Also another example is ,"Her own friends won't have anything to do with her ". This means she is really kind and she can forgive people easily  then other people .

This is how the authors use craft to reveal in my book.

MY NAME

My name is wonderful. It is unique, nobody in my school has it nobody in the world has it.

It sounds like the ripple of the sea, Maisha, but it is soft and sweet like an angel.

My name means the one that is living, just like my Prophet's wife Aisha which makes my name more special.

My name is dark, which I personally like. My name was given to me by God. It was created for me. It is remarkable and exceptional... because it is my name.

summary of My Life Undecided

MY LIFE UNDECIDED is about a girl (Brooklyn Pierce) who always makes bad decisions,her parents love her sister better,her best friend just ditched her,and she gets caught smoking when it wasn't even her fault!!  she had enough. She was so alone. No friends to comfort her , nobody . Until  she made a blog about her life. But the viewers pick what she has to do. But then 2 boys come in her life. 1 super hot,cool,dangerous and popular new kid that seems to have an interest in her. Or the super geeky,sweet, cute in a geeky way,safe guy . Which one? All these things are happening in her life until her sister comes back from Harvard all excited.........to excited.Brooklyn new something was wrong, she new she was right when her sister collapsed. Seems like her beloved older sister was doing drugs. So what is going to happen next........read to find out